Thursday, March 28, 2013

Writing from Fairy Tales


What is a Fairytale? It's a highly moralistic story - usually warning. It's often completely unrealistic. This includes myths/legends.

Three main types of fairytale-run-offs
Mirrored: exact same story, 300 times longer (i.e. goose girl, by Shannon hale)
Twisted: same story, basically follows the same thing, but it’s from a different character’s point of view, or it has a twist at the end. (i.e. once upon a time – little red riding hood is also the wolf, so it’s a twist)
Fractured: more rare type. Everything is completely different (i.e.  just a few elements. i.e. "Cinderella" character has two step sisters, but she’s an arson assassin – everything else from the fairytale story goes away at some point).
- Thanks Sarah for teaching us today!

Wednesday, March 20, 2013

Description Writing Exercise

We often focus too much on the visual and neglect the other characteristics when describing scenes and people. To get out of this, try writing a scene from a blind person's perspective--focusing on the sounds, the temperature, the textures, the smells...

Developing Characters


Here's just some quick basics...
1. Physical
- the physical attributes will influence the motivation sometimes, and definitely affect the personality.

2. Motivation (backstory/history, occupation, drive)
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3. Personality
- physical attributes & motivation will affect personality

Friday, March 1, 2013

Publishing Panel - Great Info on Publishing!


Publishing Panel February 26, 2013
Here are some notes, thanks to Deirdre Paulsen...

Chris Crowe BYU English Department, has published over 100 articles and 15 books:  “Editors don’t publish what editors don’t publish.”  Be familiar with Writers Market so can find out what publishers publishAmazed that writers submit pornographic material to Deseret Book!
Learn to cut. . .the editor should never be the first one to see your work (and your mother doesn’t count as a critical reader!).
 “I’ve written one children’s book and doubt that I’ll do another.”

Steve Cantwell vp “Writers-at-Work”:  “Have fun with failure.”  Have a thick skin – eventually you’ll start getting nice notes rather than nasty ones from editors.
Highly recommends Poets and Writers – “pulls together all deadlines.”  Also recommends all the “Best” books series. . .like Best American Spiritual Writing.  These books give the sites where the stories were published.
Glimmer Train is looking for new writers (a lot wind up in anthologies).  Great place to submit if just starting out.

Kent Minson BYU Academic Press: Talked about some of the dangers of self-publishing.  Usually when you self-publish it will cost you $10,000 for 1,000 to 2,000 books – then you still need to find a distributor and do your own marketing.  Most people wind up with a garage full of undistributed books.
BYU Academic Press on the other hand offers a la carte publishing:  cover design and editing for example.  And there is no minimum on how many books you have printed (you could submit a printed and bound copy of your work to a publisher to impress them).  You can also purchase a Press Package for $75 to have your book on the BYU Bookstore list.
Deseret Book publishes only 3% non-solicited manuscripts – they are looking for known names.  If  your work is fiction, try Covenant or Cedar Fort.  The better you know a publisher, it helps you get published and to understand why when they don’t publish.  They want return on their investment. 
Self-publishing a children’s book is very expensive since they have so much color plus they’re hard back.  It’s a very difficult market to break into – parents are very careful when purchasing childrens’ books. . .much more careful than when they buy a paperback for themselves in an airport. 


Marissa Widdison, Church Magazines, Friend magazine: Read the magazines you want to submit to first so that you know what stories they publish and how the topics are treated. (This seems simple, but there are lots of people who obviously don’t do this before they send things to us!) The Friend accepts the most freelance.  The other magazines accept articles from non-commissioned authors, but as donations only. Commissioned authors are usually experts in their respective fields (like the dean of a department at BYU).
For guidelines specific to each magazine, visit that magazine’s website and look for a link called “submit material” or “writer guidelines.” For the Friend, go to lds.org/friend and the link is at the bottom of the page.  If you send a message to friend@ldschurch.org, we will send you a list of topics that we are currently looking for.  If your work needs a lot of editing, or if you don’t have prior experience, we will often ask for the work to be donated rather than purchased.

I see success in this field as a combination of ingredients pulled from two wells. First, the well of life experience. Get out there and enjoy adventures, big and small! Look for stories in the world around you. Second, the well of knowing how to write well. Increase your knowledge of styles, treatments, literary devices, etc. Keep a journal where you practice sharing the stories you see each day. If both of these wells are kept full, the time will come when you will find a magic combination that someone will be thirsty for.
Come to fairs and conferences whenever possible—like the upcoming Publishers Fair. It makes a difference for editors if they have met with the authors. 

Colleen Whitley author and editor, established the BYU Publishing Lab in 1997:  Read your rejection slips and learn from them.  Become familiar with all the books like Writers Market so that you know where to submit certain genres.
Among the many opportunities facing new authors are some pitfalls, and as in every other area, the digital age has expanded both. Among the resources to help writers navigate these difficult waters is the Science Fiction & Fantasy Writers of America website:  sfwa.org.  It is not limited to Sci Fi and Fantasy, but is open to the public, frequently updated, and offers a range of good sites for writers at no cost.  Their For Authors page, sfwa.org/for-authors/information-center has information on preparing and submitting manuscripts, contracts, and writing techniques. The Writer Beware section sfwa.org/for-authors/writer-beware alerts authors to publishers, editors, agents, and outright scams that have a track record of abusing writers. 
 When you are looking for places to publish, consider short non-fiction works such as travel articles in Travel magazines.